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I'm trying to practice my anatomy, which is horrendous, but at least it doesn't exactly look like I drew a stick figure. Any suggestions are greatly welcomed! ^^
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Love the green/yellow color scheme! He's definitely not a stick figure, but the pose seems rigid. Almost like his spine is perfectly aligned. The spine naturally curves even in guys and making it more pronounced lends a gracefulness which in turn accentuates a floating pose. In relation to the background, which seems to be curved, a bit of foreshortening that narrows towards the feet would work but that's always ridiculously hard and awkward to get right.

Your proportions are pretty fantastic, still. And it's just what I think, none of it really means a thing if you don't agree :) Great work!